I love you for this. I really do.

I don't quite understand some of the series of events, I can't tell what's actually happening most of the time (both sound and animation-wise), and it's generally hard to follow (e.g. she jumps down a chute from the street, and then she falls down into the pit and somehow ends up back on the street? And the introduction of the last two characters after the credits is off the wall). Despite these, however, the animation was well done, the voice-actors were chosen well, and the music wove into the story very nicely. Wish I could get into projects like this, to be honest!

Best

I thought about MS paint, I thought about at least half a dozen different MC skin generators. But by GOD Swain, you've done it. You've made a simple interface with intuitive and self-explanatory options, and you've done it in such a way that's fun and intelligent. I thank you so much for this, haha!

Welp

Very good, very good. I do the same sometimes; just make a ton of crud and have nothing to do with it. It's a lot like writing in that it serves well as good inspiration for later, you know?

Hahaha

Even if I hadn't read the story, that shit is hilarious!!! Awesome job man!

Hmmm

There's a lot of music running around Newgrounds that completely kills the originality of songs because they utilize the dance/techno beat so often. I mean, every other song I hear on here is techno. Which is why it's a surprise to find something like this that - although a common song type - that has such a beautiful melody and entrancing beat. You do the genre proud, my friend. Keep it up!